Winter is here
It's a great feeling because
spending the holidays alone
Is the best, and you are not
Enjoying the weather, because it
Is too cold to have fun, start
Realizing that it's not true that it
is going to be a good weekend,
You know it
Winter is here
Go back inside
Do not
Enjoy what this season has to offer
It's the most depressing time of the year
So don't even say
It's the most wonderful time of the year
The snow is falling
No one is spreading Christmas cheer
It's silly to think that
People are actually happy
Winter is here
Think it's too sad? Well, reverse it. Start from the bottom and read up.
this poem is really great from top to bottom and bottom to top! i think it's so creative, and the wording is spectacular! Awesome job!
ReplyDeleteSimply stupendous (sorry; I've commented on almost all the poems; they're all so good, I'm running out of adjectives with similar meanings) So creative and ingenious! I like that it makes sense originally and then you added the note at the bottom and it's a beautiful poem in reverse! That was very inventive of you.
ReplyDeleteThanx for your comment on my poem, and I'm glad that someone else likes to write poetry.
Bleh. Long comment. :P
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ReplyDeleteI have to say, that was really creative!
ReplyDeleteEddie, I love this!!! Top to bottom and bottom to top! Most writers can only do it one way. You are like those "dynamite" pencils I have at home (sharpened on both ends). :)
ReplyDelete*mind blown*
ReplyDeleteThat's all.
Eddie, this poem is very creative. The fact that you can read it in many ways makes is unique. Great job!
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